This story is fantastic! You've captured his snarky voice so well! I could picture Jack Davenport playing this whole scene to the hilt - lazy, laconic, sarcastic and broken. And I can see the pirates and wenches telling their stories - their rotten teeth and dirty corsets, their half empty bottles and dirty hands. Great job! More, more! (With Norribeth, pleeeeese?)

snafflebitink